Thanks Avatari, I have only just got round to reading your response due to my free time (I know that excuse is getting old already). Don't worry about tearing my
website hosting apart, I would not have posted if I did not want honest opinions.
Definitely take your point on the "grammatical and spelling errors". As you may see from my previous posts (and this one) it has never been my strong point

Luckily, my clients are responsible for their own content
I do know a copywriter so I will ask them to give my
website hosting the once over.
Thanks Again
P.S. I feel very self conscious about posting now, I feel like this is going to be graded
P.P.S. I hope you don't mind me steeling your paragraph to replace the one on my
website hosting 